My Own Rock Song!!!

My association with rock music ( a very brief one at that ) has been most entertaining and surprisingly very inspirational.I haven't had much of time for other rock genres but the ones I was introduced to , viz 'thrash ' and 'nu' and pink floyd's 'psychadelic' , have been great.

Forgive me for the length of my posts. I know I should try to bring in more quality than quantity ( ah!! how many times have we heard that one!! ) and by saying that mind you I am being my unusual unegoistic self here and I don't intend to change.

As I was saying it has been most 'inspirational'... yeah got me right 'inspirational'.Now don't go on thinking that I changed my mind and now I want to be a rockstar.No....I don't.By inspirational I mean the effect these rock songs can have on people.That part of the rock song inspired me to write a rock song and give the effect through the music.The musician in me is still in its infancy and all I managed was the lyric.Again I would like the readers to read this as a song (or poem if you want to call it that) as something of substance.And understand.But that does not mean I dont invite comments.Please do comment.Its my food.

Here goes the song.........
(not named yet)

I feel two things
At the same darn time
Once my heart sings
Once nothing but mime

Everyday a love song
A loving loving wife
I don’t wanna live long
Just a simple life

A cosy place called hut
Just a simple life
In my mind oh! But
A bigger bigger strife

Broken pieces of heart
Defeated bodies of all
Hunger 'cross the world
Lack of EVERYTHING

Break out and
CHANGE THE WORLD

No love song
No loving caring wife
A battle too long
Just give up my life

I’ve decided to
Break out and
CHANGE THE WORLD

A cosy place called hut??
Try death or life
No 'if's no 'what's and never 'but'
Someone just won the strife

Break out and
CHANGE THE WORLD

Now my heart sings
All at one time
No two things
Forgot to mime
It’s decided to
Break out and
CHANGE THE WORLD

CHANGE THE WORLD

CHANGE THE WORLD

CHANGE THE WORLD…

-----------Composed by First Blog....